A real thing.

here you can find charts and drawings of how cool fine and rad stuff is. aren't you glad I did not perish in that hotel fire up in Anchorage? I got some cool Star Wars stuff from that.
Showing posts with label the werewolf convo. Show all posts
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Sunday, November 11, 2018

Day 11- "That's Not How Werewolves Work" context

Had this part plotted out since last year, but didn't actually put it up because GAAYYY, only implying subtly that stuff in the first draft. I'm not sure this convo does go during the hurricane, because a lot of the exposition fits better before meeting Unwin. Losing a friend, his powers not having control over that, makes the Unwin threatening Pontifex thing sink in more, and Unwin straight-up calls Pontifex Moone's boyfriend and Moone being rendered uncomfortable by that wouldn't make sense unless those feelings are already there. But this part as initially planned slots quite neatly into day 13 of last year, here. Replacing, "[Moone brings up old werewolf friend, continuing to skirt around the issue, mentions full moon or something.]" I've included a few sentences to sandwich as context nonetheless.